My older sister sent me this message today, about 7 hours ago: '' Hey (my name), how are you? We need to see another movie soon. We have some really exciting news we want to share with you, we don't want mom or dad to know though. so when we go to the movies again soon I'll have to share the exciting news'' Then my sister sent me this because I didn't reply ''Are you there or is mom on your facebook? ....Well, I'll call you soon. I love you, take care''
I was thinking about saying this, ''Hey (Her name), I'm good... How are you?
Yeah, I'll think about it. When would you want to if we do go see another movie?
Also, Mom wasn't on my Facebook, I was. But I was away from the computer when you messaged me and by the time I came back you were offline....''
Does that message sound ok? Should I add or change anything?
Thanks